Why Is It?

by BeautifulDisaster   Dec 25, 2006


Why is it
that just when things
start looking up
a little thing screws it all up?

why is it
that even though
he said it your not sure
if its the truth?

why is it
that him saying it affected
her greatly but her saying it
didnt affect him at all?

why is it
that she truly loves him
but shes not sure
if he loves her?

why is it
that he wont
even tell the truth
to anyone?

why is it
that his mom hates her
which makes his dad
not like her?

why is it
that after years
shes still stuck
in the same spot?

why is it
that no matter how many people
tell her she can do better
yet another one does?

why is it
that once a year
she ends up crying
saying she cant do better?

why is it
that one day he loves her
but the next he hates her
over and over again?

why is it
that after crying
every single girl
seems prettier?

why is it
that no matter who you want
one of your "friends"
wants him too?

why is it
that when your
finally "over him"
he wants you back?

why is it
that when you see him
in the hallway
you want to cry?

why is it
that no matter how many times
you talk to him alone
hell still lie in front of his friends?

why is it
that as many times
as you tell him the truth
he still says your lying?

why is it
that you can write poems
and let him read them
but it hurts to talk to him?

why is it
that when your upset
every single one of your friends
is happy?

why is it
that when your happy
not one of your friends
is happy with you?

why is it
that one day you decide to give up
but the next day hes does
something making you rethink?

why is it
that it doesnt matter
how long it takes
as long as you get feelings out?

why is it
that he wont even take
the time to listen
to what you say?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I love the way you use repetition in this poem to show the strngh your feelings well written hun

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Intresting prospective, This poem makes one think. The meassage was clear, the word choice was great, and the emtion strong. excellent job. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    This poem is obviously about you or someone you know and i can tell by all the detail.. however.. its very simple and is hard to understand in the beging because its all he and she and his and her.. and it just kind of jumps around..

  • 17 years ago

    by Never URs

    This poems so different than some of your other ones, I love this style too! you're a great writer

  • 17 years ago

    by emptysole

    Whi is it
    that him saying it affected
    he greatly but her saying it
    didnt affect him at all?

    i would look at this bit again.
    lol u have a typo but good work kep it up