These lovely events of life really become very painful when someone so close is not by our side....all we can do is to cherish time that we have spent together...well this is life...right?? |
by Rachel RTVW
Baeutifully sad. Painful and true words written from your heart. I know Uncle John is smiling down upon you from heaven. I love you Aunt Cindy, Merry Christmas and may God bless your broken heart. |
by john graver
Very sad. x-mas is always tough. 5/5 good write. |
by dora
Aw that was beautiful and sad at the same time. i loved the words u used.. it was a very heartfelt poem. well done on it. xx |
by Michelle18
Awwww very heart warming..very sad at the end tho.. great job! |
by Jenni Marie
Your poetry really touches my heart... |
I dont know if its because of the amazing writing, or that it was posted on christmas eve but this one really brought tears to my eyes...im sorry for your loss, you captured true pain in this piece, and i can only hope to become as amazing of a writer as you are |
by Baby Rainbow
Never try to hid memories... xx |