That poem sounds so final and has such a desperate tone to the words..
But remember, when we've hit rock bottom, the only way left is up =)
5/5 as always
Luv Gem x

Aww sad but great poem, I give it a 5/5.

It sound so nagetive. the ending got me thinking. it's writen well. gr8 job:)

Oh hun I wish I could show you. Your loved but I don't know how... so all I can do is tell you.

This poem was really very good. I really liked it. Please always remember that God is always there for you. I know it's really hard to always believe it, I have trouble remembering too. But He is, and He cares and He has really big plans for you and He knows just who you are suppose to be with. And He isn't giving up until you find her so you shouldn't give up either. And please also remember that I am here for you too. :-) I'll talk to you later!!!!! buh-bye!!
Burning~Wings

Wow what an amazing poem. It might seem so helpless and you'll never be happy again but you got to believe that it will. A new year is approaching and who knows what that will bring. Gots to be better than the last if it cant get any worse. Excellent write, Take care.

Kelly
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