Such a sad poem. so strong and detailed yet simple. 5/5 keep writing.

Omg. this is so sad. i love the way it is written especially the last lines, "beloved daughter the headstone reads
she smiles sadly but inside she bleeds" these two lines captured the entire poem and made it that much better for me. it is great. if you have time can you please comment on myu poem "don't maken my mistakes" it is true

Heeey seriously this is a gr888 poem it really touched me :(:( keep the hard work