by Goran Rahim Dec 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The bright sun is set. |
by David
So sad. the emotion is evident in this poem. the sadness yet love too. |
by Perfection
This was an excelent poem in evey way , i cannot find a singel flaw in it =) |
by Unknown Soul
Wow! this one is too touching....well done..keep holding on to the good things. "toze kwranasha la mn naya bas barasi jwana"well done.5/5 |
by blueknight
This poem was so exceptional what a great full emotion can be seen here very sad and emotional great poem yet long but all the feeling on ech letter flows like a stream great piece again............ |
I hate to say it but it was not as wonderful as I had hoped. Nothing really stuck out in my mind as entirely wrong. It just seemed so drawn out. Please try to make your poetry more enticing. If you don't, you'll find that your poetry is more of a chore than your readers will like. |