Some Advices Before I Die

by Goran Rahim   Dec 25, 2006


The bright sun is set.
The heart beats of my life
Is at its ends.
It is time to die,
Leaving the love, the family,
And the friends.

The time you will hear,
That I am dead,
don't shed a drop of tear.
thinking it was my destiny,
Accept it as it is all fair.
The time you will hear,
That I am no more.
don't cry, so I could leave happily.
You can do that much for me,
I am sure.

Don't feel bad for my death,
As I don't wish to live anymore.
Let me die, as
There is no hope left to live for.
Come,
And comfort everyone.
Join my family,
Be around them.
Be there,
For the final goodbye,
As for me,
You are one of them.

Don't feel guilty,
For the times
You hurt me,
I have already forgave you.
Please do the same for me,
For the times I bothered you.

Whenever you remember me,
Take out my poems,
As they are all written for you.
Read them,
Yet don't shed tears,
Knowing how much I loved you.

Don't let anyone rip them,
Or publish them anywhere.
Because they belong to you,
With no one else,
I would share.

After me,
Be happy all your life,
Never shed a drop of tear.
Remember for your smile,
Someone above really care.
Be a mature girl,
Know who really care about you.
Don't get lost in the world of cheats,
Don't let someone deceive you.

I know I would not be around,
To cry for your each sorrow.
Yet you have to be strong,
Fighting this world,
For a better tomorrow.

Whenever you feel down,
Thinking the life is so tough.
Just don't forget,
Someone still loves you,
A dead heart, but for you,
Still full of love.

I am leaving you here,
in this painful world.
But your love will remain the same.
Please remember
My advices.
Please remember
My name.

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    So sad. the emotion is evident in this poem. the sadness yet love too.

    the structure you used was very interesting, made the poem different. loved it. change is good!

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Perfection

    This was an excelent poem in evey way , i cannot find a singel flaw in it =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Unknown Soul

    Wow! this one is too touching....well done..keep holding on to the good things. "toze kwranasha la mn naya bas barasi jwana"well done.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    This poem was so exceptional what a great full emotion can be seen here very sad and emotional great poem yet long but all the feeling on ech letter flows like a stream great piece again............

  • 17 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    I hate to say it but it was not as wonderful as I had hoped. Nothing really stuck out in my mind as entirely wrong. It just seemed so drawn out. Please try to make your poetry more enticing. If you don't, you'll find that your poetry is more of a chore than your readers will like.

    Sorry for the negativity, just thought I would be honest!