Hey, You wrote this for a contest right? I entered the same one. I think you did really good witht this. When I saw that title I wasn't sure if I could ever come up with something for it but you handled it very well. Keep it up! :)
~Midnight Sun

Hey, very nicely done
And such an orginal poem as well. Although it may have been a title contest, the words and emotion was all your own
Well done
5/5
*Gem*