Comments : UNDYING

  • 17 years ago

    by dbaby

    I love how the first two lines of every stanza draw people in and keep them reading its a really good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    So much power behind this poem the raw emotion is truly felt. this is a really great poem and it truly shows how ur feeling. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Damn!! this is really painful...when your own do a thing like this...but trust me dear...Justice will happen on its own & all you have to do is...keep patience...i know its hard.

    Very nicely potrayed ur anger.

    all the best and take care