"Kiss me on my forehead
As I slowly close my eyes
Kiss me on my lips
As we say our last goodbyes" the final kiss the last goodbyes, ive always wondered why is there a "good" in goodbye? I love this poem. and i dont think i should get her to read my poems knowing the real pain im going thru would devestate her, im keeping most of it from her. Your poem was fantastic as always :)))

What's with you and Frank and being talented rhymers ; )

That was SO good! You really do have so much talent, Gem. Hehe...I was gonna choose my favorite stanza but I just love the whole dang thing! Lol! :) Thanks for another great read!
~Midnight Sun

"Kiss me on my forehead
As I slowly close my eyes
Kiss me on my lips
As we say our last goodbye"

Lovely! I loved the whole poem especially this stanza!
xoxo

Wow.
i think this is the best poem i've seen on this site.
seriously. it's really good.

What a kind and tender way of infusing the good into goodbye.........When hearts are truly held, separation is moot...........

Are you sure this is a Dark poem?......Sounds more like sad Love to me.....;-)

Hey hun i really liked this poem. the words u used was great. hope u have a merry christmas =) xx

Love Dora

Good job! Diff from your other stuff but good all the same! hope you win...wait did I enter it??? jk lol
Bye,
Charisma*

Wow....that was cool! congrats on gettin 2nd in the contest. anyway, i loved the detailing..it was amazing! keep it up! 5/5

Good job once again. Love the whole poem!

What more can I say, The rhyme scheme was flawless. I understand why you put this in the dark poetry, although, you could have put it in other catagories as well. Word structure was simply done, but that added to the character of the poem as a whole.

Good Job.
Jeannie

Brilliant!!
i really enjoy reading your poems, another 5/5 =D

Sad but beautiful . I loved it.

So passionate!!!

Love

Hey, You typed THRID??? on one of my poems...did I place third and just not know...or what was that all about. I'm so confused!
Charisma*

OMG! This is great! I love it! How do you do it? You're amazing! Keep it up girly!
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