Comments : The loss...

  • 17 years ago

    by Semmie

    This is beautifully written it is like a poem that we would analyse in english literature nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by Dhantie

    Thats a Strong poem I like it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ian Robert

    Nice peice, thanks for the comment on mine.

    One note tho to keep up nice clean professional looking work, keep the breif out, like (lol, rofl, tho, we'z, and stuff)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ian Robert

    Sweet