This is a poem that can't be discribed in words. Great depressing poem. 5/5

Short but very good i like it

This poem is awesome!!! 5/5

Very very good! nice work! 5/5

Very very good! nice work! 5/5

Wow that was amazing!!! it had so much passion! i loved it!! 5/5

This poem really impacts the reader, what can i say? you are gifted.

Whoa! Man oh man...the way you expressed your pain....holy cow! I love it! I also love how its so short and yet so emotional....keep it up!!

~Morgan~

Pretty good. I would personally add another two lines right before the last stanza, as it seems to kind or end 'out of nowhere', know what I mean? Still, I like it, keep up the good work.

Gooooooood job girl:):)

Iloved it:):)

khuloodan:)
smile all the time:)

I think that the flow was a little of in this one but the rhyming is good

Wonderfully written, it was short yet was easily explained.. Come to think of it, all your poems are wonderful, you're going on my favorites list.. ^_^

Short and simple and yet still expresses s much!, u got into the depression very well, I enjoy every bit.

Luvs
DeadGirl

Short and simple, but it was simply amazing :)
5/5.

Short,sweet, and to the point. I enjoyed reading this.5/5

I know how that feels, keep it up!!!5/5

This poem is excellent! although, the other 20 coments tell you that, but you wanted me to comment. this poem had a nice flow, and although it was short it was filled with emotion!
--TheGothicAlbino

I love it! short and full of emotion! It was.. Wow. Your a very talented and unique writer! Keep it up, def more than a 5!

Wow!!! awesome u have talent very much so~~ anyway comment on mine and ill comment on urs k

Wow thats a great poem, we can only try!