Teardrops (Triolet)

by Rachel RTVW   Dec 25, 2006


Teardrops of sadness spill my pain,
A heart is broken so one cries.
Lost and then found where sorrow lies.
Teardrops of sadness spill my pain.
So time will heal all wounds they say,
I'll patiently await that day.
Teardrops of sadness spill my pain,
A heart is broken so one cries.

Copyright©2006 Rachel Barnett

Triolet
A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines
repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital
letters representing the repeated lines.

Make writing a Triolet more challenging! Make each line 8 syllables in length (4 metrical feet),
written in iambic tetrameter (the more common way), or try it in pentameter (English version)
where each line only has 10 syllables(5 metrical feet).

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  • 17 years ago

    by oksana

    I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
    <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    The technicalities make my head spin
    I am a simple man and perhap a bit dim....loved the poem just the same
    just keep on writing again and again!
    10 of course!

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Beautiful poem, i've never written a triolet before but i think i might give it a go see what i get!!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    It looks hard to write. gee. but you made this topic into a beautiful poem. i loved it.

    just the way this style is set out appeals to me.

    5 cause it excellent.

    david

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    A lovely poem, you are so talented to write a challenging poem like this one.
    Keep up the awesome work,
    love Tara-Kay