To Make-Up

by Christina McDowell   Dec 25, 2006


I want us to get back together
Not that you want to
And be with each other forever
Without that possibility makes me ---blue

I can't stop crying
To not hear you say, " I love you" ---anymore
Makes me continue dying
To remember you walked out the ----door

You don't consider my feelings
Or even care
As I slowly lose feeling
That pain that I can't bear

I want to make up
And relieve all the pain
With on one to interrupt
And run from the rain

Tears of sorrow, tears of joy
Just stop these tears
Baby boy
...I continue to run from my fears

You left me alone
When you stabbed me in the heart
Sitting by the phone
And falling apart

I can't stand this pain
As I slowly die
I wipe away all my tear stains
Even though I continue to cry...

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I thought you did a very nice job keeping the rhyme scheme of this one. Some good word usage. Loved the last stanza. I felt your 3rd stanza from the bottom didn't flow like the rest, but overall it was a very well done poem. Thank you SO MUCH!!! for the sweet comment on my poem. I'm glad I'm on your favs...always nice to know someone enjoys your work. I liked this piece!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is such a good poem! You kept the ryming really good truout the whole thing, and you got the emotion across!!!! 5/5 well done!!!!! Thank you for the lovely comment you left on my poem!!!!!

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