WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is such a good poem! You kept the ryming really good truout the whole thing, and you got the emotion across!!!! 5/5 well done!!!!! Thank you for the lovely comment you left on my poem!!!!!

I thought you did a very nice job keeping the rhyme scheme of this one. Some good word usage. Loved the last stanza. I felt your 3rd stanza from the bottom didn't flow like the rest, but overall it was a very well done poem. Thank you SO MUCH!!! for the sweet comment on my poem. I'm glad I'm on your favs...always nice to know someone enjoys your work. I liked this piece!
Charisma*