Wow! this is so good. we have alot in common..keep writing. its good.

Very good indeed 5/5 +1 for sure

Again...i loved it!!!i hope you're not feeling like this...it sucks.

Pretty good.
I can feel the emotions in the poem, that you want to get across to the reader. Wonderful job on that. But the problem to me was that I think that you were trying to force some of your rhyming and the messed up the poem a bit.
Overall, it was a great poem! =] You've got a lot of talent as a writer, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie