by Tenisha Dec 25, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
AS THE LIGHTS DIM AND THE SHADOWS APPEAR |
by Emi
Very good |
So i have a few comments. u should make it not all upper case. it distracts form the words. add some more punctuation. spell check and read it over cause there are some parts where words should be changed. the message and the format was amazing though. i loved how you worded it and the words u chose. great poem. |
Very good keep up the good work |
by Brittany
Thats how i feel every day but im verry close to killing myself |
Wow thats nice....i dont know what to say its great really i dont know what to say its excellent i liked it. |