Wow!... You've written this poem very well, I found it very interesting. You've looked at the topic in a way that I would never have. Keep up the good work!. x

Wow i like it u write reall good u use lots of deltail dats koo
keep it up

Great poem. nice metaphors, and nice wording. Please don't submit in capitals, but i really liked the figurative language. I know how you feel. Great job, keep on writing.
5/5
~Stevie

Heyy im liking your poem! its awesome.. like litterealy., you should make more! its awesome.

Good poem, the capital letters made it hard to read for me haha Im an oldie, but great poem. Love the I rather die than live in fear part. 5/5

This was a really good poem 5/5

Wow thats nice....i dont know what to say its great really i dont know what to say its excellent i liked it.

Thats how i feel every day but im verry close to killing myself

Very good keep up the good work

So i have a few comments. u should make it not all upper case. it distracts form the words. add some more punctuation. spell check and read it over cause there are some parts where words should be changed. the message and the format was amazing though. i loved how you worded it and the words u chose. great poem.

Very good