When its dark at night

by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX   Dec 25, 2006


When its dark at night
U r my moon shinning bright
wheneva I'm in a fight
Ur there 2 help with all ur miight

When I go 2 sleep
U r my pillow soft nd sweet
If I wake up and don't feel u near
I go mad cause ur voice is da music I need 2 hear

Being away from u is something I jus can't bare
Don't try 2 leave jus 2 see if I care
I no you'll b with me 2 da day I die
U r my love, baby it aint no lie

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The emtiopn was strong and clear. Again I think it would have been better if the shortcut were formed into written out words, but I liked the feeling I got from reading this. the flow was good. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    This sort of made me go in aww how sweet sort of thing....5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    That was soo great!!....5/5 i loved it!!

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