by Michelle18 Dec 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
All alone she sits and stares, |
by Nix
You could wrote this poem in stanzas. It would be better and easier to read. I don't like topic. 4/5 |
by tayXcore
This one is really good have you ever won any competitions??? |
by brittany
Wow!! ur very talented def keep writting 5/5 im gonna add you to my favorites lol |
by Jenni Marie
I loved this! |
Very well written. The choice of words and the rhyming where well used. Although the structure could be better, perhaps using stanzas would help. |