Ur poems almost brings tears to my eyes... u have a talent, keep writng, as i wi
ll keep reading...

Good poem but a sad goodbye. I like it 5/5

Really a good poem, i enjoyed it 5/5

Wow.
I feel the pain that you're expressing in the poem. Love how you ended the poem at whole too. Wonderful job writing this one, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

"The truth hurts". never has a truer statement been made. good write. 5/5

Yea the truth hurts!! i really enjoyed this poem.. feelings are out there.. 5!!

Object, useless, but visible

this is a real good poem! i like it, youre a real good writer! i love your work!

Narc xxx

Another great one, the flow is fantastic and the rhymes are pretty much flawless 5/5

Verry good, was rather short but still well written...

The truth so many times does end up hurting you.

another perfect poem. great poet! 5 from me.

David

Omg!! another great!! poem i feel the same way with my ex i love all your poems 5/5

brittany

This poem reminded me of a time i felt like that..i went through that a few times. its an amazing poem and has a lot of feeling great job sweetie

Well, i dont know what to say except i think this is so true of my situation at present , really felt every word x

This is a beautiful poem. and yea the truth hurts i can really relate.

Aww sweetie, I don't think you should ever ever EVER let a guy make you feel like that. I'm sorry you had to go through that, most of us do. :[ I really liked the last line; it was definitely my favorite.

im not in you thoughts or in your heart,
^^You should be your. :]

Another great poem!

Cayce xx