Goodbye

by Michelle18   Dec 25, 2006


Its hurts me inside,

its so painful it makes me cry.

you say if i love you i will wait,

but i dont know how much more i can take.

its hard sitting around watching you love other girls,

it makes me feel like i dont belong in this world.

i dont know if you even love me too,

im so lost and confused, i dont know what to do.

the more we talk the more i fall in love with you,

but you say you still need time to think it all through.

the pain grows more everytime you say you dont know,

i think its time that i must go.

just remember i will always love you,

and i will always miss you,

and unlike you, i will never forget you.

i dont want to lie, i know i will cry,

im so sorry but we have to say goodbye.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kristal

    I really liked this poem, wish i could write something as good....
    i can also relate quite well to this poem...

  • 17 years ago

    by Alissa

    This poem was great, I liked how you set your emotions out first, then you creeped in the the true purpose of this poem. Saying goodbye.
    That was a great ending, you are really good at catching the reader and making them keep reading. Fantastic is all I can say!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom

    I like your writing. I could be wrong but I think it is very similar to mine. Another 5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so sad, yet beautifully written!
    I absolutely loved the wording in this, it really touched me.
    A wonderful poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    The flow needs a little improvement but not much.The rhymes also need a little work[but maybe they were intentional?] idk lol My favorite lines are

    im so lost and confused, i dont know what to do.

    the more we talk the more i fall in love with you,

    Flow is very good in those!

    The ending really wrapped up the whole poem! nice work! 4/5

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