This boy

by the lost mind   Dec 25, 2006


You were the joy
too this crazy boy
but know he crys
because inside he dies
he wishes to run away
he wishes he wishes each day
he wishes the knife
would hurry up and take his life
but it doesn't, born to suffer
stuck as a hopeless lover
he stairs in to the night sky
he hopes he would die
but it can't come true
because god still has stuff for him to do
so he lives on empty carcass no soul
like a puppet running on coal.

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  • 17 years ago

    by repair her heart

    Ummmmmmmmm i like this one to..its something simple and straight to the point...but at the same time gets really deep...........(just incase ur wondering why i commented every poem almost...im in computer class not doing my work and i decided to check up on your thoughts:D)

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina McDowell

    And by the way, 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina McDowell

    *sniff sniff* Really good! I love! check out my poems. i think u might like them and hope u do. There pretty sad and dark too, but jsut enough~! keep up the writing, ur on my favs list. Ur really good!

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