This reminds me of bobby=( but i like it!=]

This was really enjoyable to read. Very good emotion conveyed. Nice work.

Good job, nice flow

Really a nice poem, i felt the pain... you might wanna go a little deeper into things next time though, just try it... nice job

Very nicely done.
Emotions done well, flow was perfect, and you described everything great. Another fantastic job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Well you are very talented! Really enjoyed this one also. Excellent word choices. Great job!

Ok, so I didn't read it. Sorry. For some reason the whole skipped-line thing really bugged me. Maybe its just me.. I'm sure it was great though lol!

I pray to God that he'll be okay

i like this poem, its real nice! well done!

I really liked this one, I thought it flowed really well, and the wording really pulled me into it.
Good job.

Great poem...

RJ

You're a talented writer! i could really relate to this poem, love it!!!!

*Shawte*

Wow.. this is an amazing poem.. i have nothing to say about it nothing to critique.. its just WOW! i love it!

The wording in this poem is very strong...
it has a unique meaning =)
one of my favs that you wrote..

Hey girl wut r u talkin about when u say u can't write poems u can and u do a darn good job af it !!!!!!!!!!!
lol p.s my name is brittany and i am 13 i love 2 write 2 some time sit is the only way u can get ur fealeans out read some of my poems and tell me wut u think ttyl bye bye

Great poem. I loved the simple formate it made it easy to read. I also liked the word choice. 5/5