You get one guess

by Sorefromreality   Dec 26, 2006


I've got this little object
It's wrapped up nice and tight
It's rather fragile mind you,
Can you guess it right?

I shall hint a few more
It's valuable and light to tow
But the person that last had it
apparently didn't think so

It doesn't work very well
It is really rather cracked
If you didn't know any better
You might think it's torn in half

This small object
That I hold in my hand
Is only meant for those
that can truely understand

I will now reveal it
maybe you knew from the start
That the precious object I hold
Is my broken heart

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  • 17 years ago

    by Raychel

    ...wow. i like it. issa guessing game!! i thought it was a banana, but when i found out it was ur heart i kinda wasnt hungry anymore...lol. it's good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wow hun. I really, really like that one. You used great descriptions, and it flowed well. Keep up the great work. =] 5/5

    Much love,
    Tammie xo