Damm your good watch out B you have a contender lol
great poem 5/5

btw sucked in B i am 1st to comment
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Lloooooooooooooooooool!!!! thnx locks!! its my second rhyming poem!XD!!! and i love how this one turned out!!! btw i think ill be writting more of this type of poetry in the future!! and thnx for the comment!!!

Thnx RoseAmi!!! im glad that you liked it^_^!!! its a true story but exagerated and made to look like a fairytale=P its my parents story in fact... thnx alot for your comment hope to hear from you soon^_0!!!

Eh.. well.. reading this poem got back alot of memories.. of ur life ofcourse.. and i remembered everythin u went through.. i find it really amazing the way u expressed ur feelings .. using the angel and devil thingy ... LOVED IT ! .. keep them coming hun bun .. u got the talent ! ;)

5/5