I'm tired

by DanceAngel   Dec 26, 2006


I'm tired of feeling worthless
I'm tired of feeling so weak
I'm tired of crying
I'm tired of lying

All my mistakes are finally showing
I'm about to hit the ground
I'm about to lose all hope
I don't want to feel alone

Sometimes I think it would be better
If everyone would hate me
Then I could run away forever
And start a brand new life

I love my friends and family
But right now it's not enough
I keep blaming them
When I know it's all my fault

I'm sorry if this hurts you
But you have to understand
The reasons I don't tell you
About the battle in my heart

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kenzie

    I think there is a lot of emotion in this, and that is what is most important, but it doesnt quite flow. you might think of rewording parts of it so that it moves from thought to thought and isn't quite so choppy. it's got great potential tho! keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by the lost mind

    It's good it has a strong meaning it just have flow to me but don't get me wrong it's very good i'd give it 4.99 if i can but i can't

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