It should've been beautiful

by Kenzie   Dec 26, 2006


It could have been all we ever needed
late night talks that last until two
silly moments shared with me and you
deeper beauty
true meaning
sweating, tingling
smiling, winking
It should have been beautiful.

but it fell apart
darker clouds
bigger obstacles
crying, hugging
hoping, waiting
I wish I didn't crave you

I may never get over you
happiness lost
drowning in thoughts
of you
only you
we could've been happy
so happy

I wish I didn't crave you
only you
wish you weren't my only desire
you made sense
of all the things that made no sense
I made sense because of you

I'll never forget you
I'll never forgive you
we could've been happy
it should've been beautiful

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  • 17 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    It's a nice poem, it has a good use of words,
    maybe ( in other poems of you aswell) you should try to make sentences have a more equal lenght( or about the same amount of syllables, ) such easy things can make a poem much more readable and have a better flow,
    :) keep writting

  • 17 years ago

    by Yulie

    This is really good. A lot of emotions here. 4/5

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