I liked it. I know how this can be. you just wish they were here still. good stuff :)

Nice poem don't be harsh on yourself just 'cause your not getting commented eh...

This is a great poem, I know how you feel, your left there asking why you're paying for his mistake, because guess what, it's his mistake because now he's missing out on you!!! Keep up the great work! 5/5!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~