Comments : Lies and Truths

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I really like this poem however.. this one stanza doenst flow as well as the other "Let me know that I can trust you,
    And weep my heart's tears,
    With someone there to wipe them away,
    Tending to a few simple needs:"

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    There will always be lies and truths, we just have to learn to seperate the good from the bad, nice job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ALEX

    Awee. love!!! this one's my favorite. it's just awesome.
    GREAT job!!!
    -Parker.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow good job. i can relate to this one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wonderful Job. I loved it. The flow was good as well as the structure. The imagery was good. Keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    I gope they were just rumors... anyways, great poem! most of it flow really well, i really could relate to it! another wonderful poem!

    Forever*Yours