by marcelah
Powerful and sad, i love it. 4/5 |
Strong poem.. nice job 5/5! |
by Rona
That was a good read! i liked how you used metaphors! great job! |
5/5. Great poem. I loved it. |
by Michelle18
Really deep and sad poem. good job. 5/5 |
by amoxi
This poem wasnt as good as your others i would revise the last 2 lines |