by Curry Dec 26, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
She lies on the floor listening to her dad scream, |
by UnToLd TrUtH
Wow this is such an emotional poem, you made it short but you left the right idea and imagry for people to stay hooked. 5/5 |
by malina
Wow...scary but i like it...alot... ^_^ |
by ashleeey
Really deep. i love it sweetie, keep it up. |
by nikki
Wow, it's sad and powerful poem, 5 from me. great writing, thanks for the comments to, :) |
by LovelyBones
Wow,,, sweetie this is amazing,, you have a true talent. there is so much emotion and passion put into this piece. it did not seem like any of the words were forced. i loved it allot |