Comments : Flying Across The Sea

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    What a nice poem. Friends are so great, even those far away can lift our spirits.

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Wonderful poem. Great job. :) *5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by john graver

    Always glad to see you happy. 5/5 very good

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    This was a beautiful friendship poem. it was unique in the way you had written it. great job. very touching xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Very nice poem! never stop writing. you have a true gift! thanx for commenting my poems!

  • 17 years ago

    by Goth

    Excellent job! I liked reading this, so I'll probably be back for more

  • 17 years ago

    by Corinne

    A lovely poem of an across the miles friendship. They can be as meaningful as the people we see face to face.

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Places we had been, things we had seen.

    the differences between you and me

    You, my friend, have given me wings,

    sorry for the critique, but i think, even though this is a stunning poem, that the changes will add to the flow and rhyme! good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very Nice Cindy, I would've liked to see it a little longer, but it was very well written. The flow was great and the strucutre as well. You are very talented. Keep up the wonderful work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This is a really excellent poem, We sometimes forget that other countries are far different from eachother, it's nice to learn about culture other then our own, excellent job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww.. this is sweet.. amazing job.. i love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Wow! that was absolutely mesmorizing. I am so captured by your words, they have so much warmth and emotion within them. you are extremely talented, and i hope you will continue to write.
    i have added you to my favourites
    xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    That was beautiful. I imagined your special friend and you, talking about all these things. I loved the emotion and heart. Good work. 4.7/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Cindy, like all the poems of yours ive read this one had captured my attention, all your poems portray a picture in my mind making me feel like i was there, 5/5!!!! love your poems, please keep making them!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Thia was so sweet...
    I could see the warmth behind the words.
    My favourite part was the last stanza, I thought that really stood out.

  • 14 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww i love this one, i like knowing you have a bight of light and happiess in your life. i will be thinking of you often and i hope i see a lot more of your work continue xxx