This is a really good poem, maybe you can try to use the spell check because it caught my eye at some points. But this is a great poem, I loved the rhyms that came out at the right moments and I think you did a wonderful job. It's true what you feel, I feel the same about someone special that I met here. He's a big part of my life and I think you shouldn't let go.

You're friend:)
alissa

Beautiful writings..
Excellent thoughts..
Marvelous outlooks..
Fantastic feelings..
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Write more, feel more and be with me for reading and commenting.. I like your poems very much indeed... 5/5

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Nazeer