Comments : Life lessons

  • 17 years ago

    by misha baby

    Wow, you were absolutely right when you said this could relate to anyone. i love it, this is an amazing poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Very long, but an amazing poem. Nice job. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by TaNyabAbEE

    YOU wErE rIght, thIs dOEs rElAtE tO AlOt Of pEOplE, I'm sUrE. It's rEAllY gOOd, kEEp wrItIng, It's AwEsOmE!!:) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kasie

    Fabulous poem! I can totally relate to it! 5/5 great poem keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by stefanie

    I really like this one.... it has a lot of meaning coming out of it. great job :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Elaine90

    Wow you really have a lot of time on your hands. That is amazing and I really can relate to that one. You need to cheer up and think of the positive things in lfe. I miss you tons and wish I was there to help you through all of this. Love you lots Ashley Elaine

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is a wonderful free verse with a beautiful and inspiring message. Excellent job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    This was great!....and all of the lines were true, and they were all things that everyone is going to have to read sooner or later...5/5...keep up the great work!....comment back please?!

  • 17 years ago

    by MzLonely

    Wow i luv it its got lots of feelings in it...=Dur a great writter keep writting =)

  • 17 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    I absolutely loved this poem and agreed with everything you said. I just want to thank you lol i needed some inspiration:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is absolutely fantastic!! Everything you wrote is so true and I think everyone can relate to it! You are such a great writer, this is just one of the best poems I have ever read, you write beautifully. Please keep it up!
    Take care, :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Valerie

    I really enjoyed reading this poem . Very powerful, and makes you think a lot !
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Aggie Angel

    I Love This Because It Is So True!!! Thank You

  • 14 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    I like this
    my fav line:

    Learn from your past
    Enjoy today as if it's your last
    and dream of tomorrow