I know there's a lot more behind this poem than what I just read. And that's why I absolutely love it. That's what I love about most of your poems. Anyways, I don't know what to tell you...hating leads to no good...but you know that. =) Just whatever the problem may be...stay strong!! xx

`Liz

Ok this ones amazing too...ummm well most of ur poems r amazing...5.5 deff!!!

Wow, that ending made this entire poem intense! It started off slightly calm, but as you read on, the anger, the hatred started building up. Then ended with a very.. harsh line. Really nicely done. I liked the progression in this poem.

Omg...love this. *i hear her* i esp. like how you put it as her. 5/5 hon. you are so talented!!!

Wow love he elevation of the poem it compliments the title rather well..and i love the ending lol u show great emotion here 5/5