Comments : My Enemy. {Homosexual Poem}

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Amazing! 5/5. It's a very good poem. Loved it~

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    I would feel strongly about this if I wrote it! This was just amazing in so many ways. It has me in tears right now...I don't even know why. I can't even explain how much I loved this. Perfectly beautiful write, hun. Never stop writing!! Take care.

    `Liz

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    I would feel strongly about this if I wrote it! This was just amazing in so many ways. It has me in tears right now...I don't even know why. I can't even explain how much I loved this. Perfectly beautiful write, hun. Never stop writing!! Take care.

    `Liz

  • 17 years ago

    by silence

    Wow. this really is an amazing poem. the first i've read of yours. I'll definatly read more :) 5/5
    thanks for the advice as well. I'll be sure to use it :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Very heart wrenching. amazingly written as always. if anyone rates this below a 5. ill go and downrateal their poems.. hrmph. naw. but if osmeone does., and your rating falls .. this poiem doesn't deserve it. =[ this really was a great and sad poem. the only thing i dont like about any part of it is this part-frightening fight.. it didn't flow or sound right to me.

    but otherwise. amazing. x33

  • 17 years ago

    by Diana Vasileva

    That was great. I never ever read a peom like that. It was amazing! omg. That was incredible . Loved the idea. keep on writing! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    This poem was excellent.. I love poems about homosexuality because I can relate to them so well..
    A very sad but well written poem.. well done 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Amazing piece, truly. *5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Very sad poem, greatly written, i'll definately be reading more of your poems 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jamie

    God doesn't kill people.. People kill people in your story that is the case.

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    A heartbreaking story, a wonderful write. I would`nt worry about the rating,people sometimes have biases that come into their voting . By the way I don`t think God would mind at all knowing whats in your heart , he understands our confusion and anger.I think he is always more merciful than those who claim to serve him.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    This poem was well written, tons of emotion and it made my heart skip a few beats and fall a little bit. great work once again :) you are able to take things that no one can comprehend the feeling of and make it into something that everyone can feel deep down . great work:)

    -/2 Terra

  • 17 years ago

    by My Dreaded Future

    Its beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by im ur AdDiCtiOn

    Thats really ace it some how brought to my face reminded me of my ex and how much i hate him your poem makes me feel good

  • 17 years ago

    by gabriel

    Oh wow...it's like -speechless-

  • 17 years ago

    by Littlewriter-a

    Wow that was way good.. very deep and personal. thats a lot of pain. Arie

  • 17 years ago

    by dela

    This was beautiful, simply beautiful! An artist who can make you feel thier words and emotions!

  • 17 years ago

    by lizzle

    F**k wat others think!dont let dem get to u!!!b strong!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    We are all human and besides it's not liking you're harming anyone by being homosexual.

  • 17 years ago

    by broken angel

    I am bisexual so this poem really hit home. It hurts alot that people don't like you or are afraid of you just because you're different. Love is love, no matter what form it takes, but people often forget this. It's not fair that people judge you for something you can't help or change. This poem is absolutely beautiful, it really truly touched me. It just makes me wonder how can people hate love? 5/5