I like this alot. i realy do. it is so well written. well done .xx 5/5

Wow.wow.wow.. omg.. i love ur poem.. its sad but its also so true about this world..i just dont understand why they cant just let us be..and stop making it such a big deal. but kodos to u..

Wow. that was beautiful. so sad. i liked this poem because it showedlove, and i could seem to picture it. beautiful. 5/5.

I won't rate this, I think its a story from the heart, but what i believe is simply loving another woman in that way i wrong, I VERY much agree that what people do when they think something is wrong the go and do something stupid and even more wrong so i don't get it, I don't care if your gay or a homosexual they are still a person who has feelings who DOES love and it is WRONG to do anything just becuase they do someting that you don't agree with.

Chrissi

What a sad but fantastic poem def another 5 vote x

Its like so amazing

Aww... that was fantastic. i absotively loved it.

5/5

Allanah

This poem is amazing beyond words...the story that it depicts is emotional and tragic..by the way Sheena I cryed like a baby this time when I read it....God job my dear

Omg this poem is sooo sad!! gosh where do you get all these great ideas?? im glad you asked me to read this poem because omg it's so good! everything about it is great.. i love it! :) 5/5 !!!! xx

Omg!! omg!! omg!!! this is one of my favorite poems that i have ever read of yours...and probably just the best poem i've ever read EVER!...its great.. good job!

Thats absolutely amazing...you really capture a brutal part of our system poetically and with strength. excellent work!

~jas~

WOW....
I actually have tears in my eyes.
This was so sad.
You did a wonderful job on this!
P.S I just read your profile, it made me giggle =D

Wow. this poem is just so deep, i'm not sure what to say. i enjoyed it, even though it was heartbreaking. great write.

Actually i can't stand homosexual people but of a poem writer it was really impressing,5/5

Great job! I haven't read any of your work, but if they are all like this, then whoa! An emotional piece, well written, =]
Ciao

Excellent poem...i dont think it matters what kinda love it is, but it is love an dthat's all that matters...
truly a sad poem...

I have to agree with some of the others that have commented on your poem. I have no problem with homo's...that's your decision and your choice, but i don't agree with this poem and how you talked about Jesus. You can't justify homosexuality and it will never be right with the Lord. I have nothing against it because i can't change it but just because i can't change it don't mean i stand for it nor do i accept it.
~*~Amber~*~

It brought a tear to my eye, it was well written. It made you seem like you were there. :(

Wow..this was realy sad. your choice of words and flow were so heart-wrenchingly awesome!
nuff luv xx