Nice nice...twas good

Dxxx david if u keep making them this good ill have to quit trying to beat you, lol, jk, this is a really good song, 5/5!!! love it.

Well done! that was a great poem! i luved it! keep writing coz ur realli gud!
XOXO Freddie

This is really good, and it truly shows you are a good boyfriend to whoever you are to now, or could be in the future, she is gon be a lucky one =)