This very original dark poem reflects a need to be discovered that I think may be shared buy the authors peers maybe a desire to be loved for who you are and not what they want you to be.. This sonnet has a very nice flow in a colloquial style perhaps then more than now if you know what I mean

My past is far then worse

I really enoyed this sonnet and pondering its meaning

Wow, just wow. I loved it, and I usually don't like dark poems, but this was very nicely written. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Yeah, it was pretty confus.. dude i totally forgot how to spell.. lol.. confussing? eh! The only problem I found was:
I'll show you the reddend eyes and mumbled words
From the partys with drugs and drinks
Just another girl who goes unheard
About alot of things

reddend.. should be redden ... but other than that.. great job babe!

5/5

I dont quite understand what its all about, but besides from that its a good poem! good job!

Narc xxx