by Rona Dec 27, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
There I was, happy as can be |
by Leanne
I can relate to this poem in so many ways, all through reading this poem i had a picture in my head of what was happening and it brought back so many memories, greatly written you have a lot of talent keep it up :) |
by Jenni
I really liked this poem. It had a great rhyming scheme, and i loved how you ended it. it was very good, keep up the great work. |
by melly xx
Aww this poem was so cute. But I do have to admit the first 2 paragraphs made me want to stop reading. The rhyming seemed a little forced there. When i saw the title though I was really excited because it sounded so cool, but i was disappointed with your poem, i mean compared to the title. |
by Michelle18
Wow.i love this one..i can relate to this one in some ways.very good poem! |
Wow.. this is my favorite poem.. its sooo good.. amazing job.. |