Wow, so..... dedicated. let him go, if he's too stupid to realize how much you care about him then his loss.

I like this one... i can relate to some parts. great job :) oh and thank you for the comment

I really liked this poem it was well written and it flowed well also, to make your last stanza better I would just change alone as can be to Lonely as can be sounds a lot better still an amzing write and a 5/5 nice job

You know what? i was actually thinking about changing:

"Alone as can be." to "Lonely as can be."

Heehee! thanks for the feedback guys! i really appreciate it!

*goes and changes "alone" to "lonely"* =)

Hun, I know the feeling...It sucks and I'm gong through something similiar right now. Stay strong. If it's menat to be, you'll find each other again someday. Thank you for the comment on my poem. This is a very good write.

~dandy~

It was good, the flow was a little off in areas though, but it was a nice poem... i enjoyed it, sad about what happened, i'm sry, i know what it's like.

Thanks 4 da comment ur not a bad writer urself.i wish u da best of luck getting ur life back on track

I loved this poem. I really like how it started out happy and then you introduced the guy and the effect that he had on you and your life. And you did it very well. I could picture it all in my mind. The flow and rhythm of it was very good and the rhyming worked very well also. Great job on this! Keep it up!

This ones good. ive had a guy do something kind of like that. it really sucksss

This was so sad...my favourite part was the last stanza, I thought that was really powerful.
I think you did a wonderful job on this, it flowed very well and was a pleasure to read.

This poem reflected my feelings about an Unrequited Love I have exprienced so well

Hmm...I don't think this one worked for me very well. I think it might ave been how cliche the topic is, but I'm not so sure.

The first problem with it was that I thought you tried to rhyme too often. Don't do that. =P If you feel as if you can't rhyme with it having a flow, don't try. It will all eventually come to you in your head and will transfer to the paper without flaws. That's how you get a great flow and rhyming scheme mixed together.

To fix the flow, I woud suggest to take out a few words here and there and possibly make the whole poem overly longer. It would make it easier to make it flow in many places, plus get your thoughts across the reader's minds.

I know I may sound like I am so dissing your poem, but I just want to be honest. =) I don't hate your poem to any extent if that's what you think. I know how you feel, and it will only take time to get over him. Keep your chin up. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow.. this is my favorite poem.. its sooo good.. amazing job..

i especially lovelovelove this stanza

"I admit, I was heart-broken that night.
As much as I want to go back to the life I once knew
I am sad to say, I cannot do that.
I cannot go back to when before I met you."

ahh its soo good lol :P

Wow.i love this one..i can relate to this one in some ways.very good poem!

Aww this poem was so cute. But I do have to admit the first 2 paragraphs made me want to stop reading. The rhyming seemed a little forced there. When i saw the title though I was really excited because it sounded so cool, but i was disappointed with your poem, i mean compared to the title.
"Back in that magical night
Of "Sight and Sound"
I wanted to tell you how I felt
Though, to my dismay, a new love you had found."
That was my favorite stanza, it just brings back some memories.
take what i said into consideration.
good job
4/5

I really liked this poem. It had a great rhyming scheme, and i loved how you ended it. it was very good, keep up the great work.

I can relate to this poem in so many ways, all through reading this poem i had a picture in my head of what was happening and it brought back so many memories, greatly written you have a lot of talent keep it up :)
5/5