Comments : Always Together

  • 17 years ago

    by stefanie

    Wow.... i really like this poem. i can feel the emotion coming out from it. great job :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A very deep romantic poem, very well written, keep up the great job like always. you are really talented. another 5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This sweet and romantic poem has a very nice poetic flow and a depth ater my own heart.

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    I really like this first stanza:

    Beckoned sweet love into my eyes.
    Hold my hand upon your heart.
    Lean into my breathtaking kiss.
    I've adored you from the start.

    This is a very sweet love poem....full of emotion. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Katlynn

    This poem is very deep, i really liked this one alot. Your very taletned && i pictured everything in this poem you were saying && i felt chills picturing it all which were good warming heartful chills by the way but very nice.

    keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem taylor, great flow, i give this one a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Beautifuly done.
    I melt when you caress my face.
    Our eyes afire in one another.
    So take my fragile hand; hold it close.
    Remember we will always be together.
    Loved this stanza. very well written

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Beautiful imagery. Wonderful flow. Overall an amazing piece. Beautifully done. *5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Angela

    Great job! I luv dis poem. Keep up da great work.

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Luv is spelled Love
    dis: the correct term is This.
    Da is THE

    Sorry but that's rediculous.
    I think you're old enough to know how to spell correctly.

  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    5/5 excellent writting.. like your words and your flow. A nice gentle over all feeling from it.. nothing overly exagerated. good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Omg! thats so good! i love it, its so beautiful,
    i love the words u used and it flowed together brilliantly! great work hun! 5/5
    xx love

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Aww.. such a nice and sweet love poem. really makes me wish i had someone to love. *tear* .. but great job writing this one. 5/5