My Sleeping Beauty

by Bradley Peter   Dec 27, 2006


The sweet sweat seeping
Off your tender brow
Yet you lay there sleeping
As I just wonder how

How amazing you are
In your innocent bliss
Would it be too far
To give a secret kiss?

Your soft seeping skin
So golden and bare
Would a look be a sin
Not that I should dare

I yearn to watch you sleep
So naturally and calm
Your mind retreats so deep
Leaving you're beauty and charm

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  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww this is very sweet. And delicately rhymed.

    • 7 years ago

      by Bradley Peter

      Thank you, Mel, and to all those who said such kind things in the past

  • 13 years ago

    by Lori

    Oh...my...goodness. This is a lucky girl whoever you wrote this for! How cute! This was a wonderfully structured piece and I loved all the cute words you used to describe this girl. Absolutely loved it :) 5

  • 13 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Oh this is a beautiful poem, its so very sweet =)
    your take on sleeping beauty is so much more heart warming than my unhappily ever after one lol!

    Again each stanza had the perfect flow, the rhyme was just spot on and the choice of wording created such tender imagery =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Raven

    I like this poem alot.... i wish it was me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rach Ray

    Boringgggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!

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