Awww... this one is cute. i like how you showed yourself as a butterfly. its flows and has great meaning. great job. 5/5 :)

* this is a cute poem but it doesnt flow that well.. you might want to work on that

*5/5. This one is much MUCH better. I loved how you had the emotion and how you started the poem in the beginning. Amazing poem.

The rhyme scheme wasn't consistent or the flow but the message and the metaphor beautiful! I especially like the last stanza.

Forgot the *

Wow. this is by far my favorite poem of yours that i've read. i love how you put everything together and how in the end you wrapped it up with you flying away. wow! if it was possible i would give you a 6/5!