Writing in Blue.

by Alvin Laberinto eNigmaa   Dec 27, 2006


It was actually right when you thought I hated you.
That's why my writing is written in blue.
I don't want to swear, it's just mean and cold,
But your not the price of a pearl, your fool's gold.

I wish that I were to feel pain,
And that you were to feel the same,
And you know that I'm not mean,
But as of late, that's what I've been.

I hardly care about you or your life,
Right now I'd kill you with a straight-edge knife.
I don't know why, but the idea is great,
I think it's the basis of my hate.

This is it, I'll tell you something I could never do:
To the thought of it, I actually LOVED you.
I'll end this poem like a boy would,
To tell things he never could....

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  • 17 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    Really good poem. I loved the first stanza, it grabbed my attention. Well done! Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow i like this poem its great to feel what u read.....that person u write about must have really done some wrong....great poem keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow, I stumbled across this poem while searching the site. It's so deep and I can really see your hate. I become like this sometimes..and When I truly hate someone...Like I happen to hate someone now for cheating on me well...Lets just say I describe it a little but too much.. :P
    xx Rox

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Great poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Xandria

    This is deep..n it's well written...
    i rate it 5/5 :D.. read myn ya sumtymes... o ya..keep up d good work!!

    -i.HEART.u-

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