This is deep..n it's well written...
i rate it 5/5 :D.. read myn ya sumtymes... o ya..keep up d good work!!

-i.HEART.u-

Great poem 5/5

Wow, I stumbled across this poem while searching the site. It's so deep and I can really see your hate. I become like this sometimes..and When I truly hate someone...Like I happen to hate someone now for cheating on me well...Lets just say I describe it a little but too much.. :P
xx Rox

Wow i like this poem its great to feel what u read.....that person u write about must have really done some wrong....great poem keep writing

Really good poem. I loved the first stanza, it grabbed my attention. Well done! Keep it up.