Amazing, that's all I can say... simply amazing.

Lov it! gr8 lesson to teach. both must be in lov to last forever. lov is sad. nice summery in the ending. keep writing:)

I loved it.

The tale of a prince with a witch for a princess
A story where love did not rise and was defeated
Happy endings are only told in old fairy tales
But this book of stories tell of tales so true

^Definately. Keep up the amazing poems!

Omg!! i love it!! excellent poem....amazing job!!! keep up the good work!

Darien!!! Omgosh. I missed your work so bad! This was just wow.. so amazing. It was very sad & very heartfelt. It made me want to cry lol. But, i absolutley loved it. AND. i loved the ending.. amazing! This was very beautiful. Keep it up, babe.

BRI.x

This is so sad, wish I couldn't relate. I love the way you tell a story with your perfectly chosen words and the arrangement of them. There are so many exquisitely written lines I couldn't possibly pick out a favorite. Really nicely done, Darien. Beautifully sad writing!

Good work.. Great poem...

I had to read this a few times to get the message. But the story behind those kinda-hard-to-read words is really good. Keep up the good work!

Omg this was so sad and deep and powerful but the words u used to express urself were so good! neway good job xx

"When love had blossomed in romance so young." That's my favorite line. And the imagery is brilliant. I really liked this poem a lot :)

Astryd

Love is sometimes soo different then what we believe it wil/Should be, and it can ruin your life when unexpected or save you at the same time. kinda like in a fairy tale - amazing write 5/5

Beautiful, eloquent wording that reaches out and captivates the reader's heart and soul. The metaphor and depth in this piece is exquisite, an overall beautiful and breath taking write. *5/5

"He fell victim to the evil brewing in his bed"

I love that line! great poem, it told a great story! great job, keep it up 5/5:)

Nice unique style... interesting approach. The poem was well organized and laid out. Good write. 5/5

Excellent job, it reminded me of a recent story I read.
"When he turned a blind eye to the pain he felt"
-Great Line
Keep it up
just a small tip since I've read alot of your poems, I think you're ready to experiment with other styles.

!@#%^&*
great job! i can understand where your coming from with your emotions..
5/5

WOW... that's like the only word to describe it... i absolutely love the 4th stanza, it's amazing!!

Forever*Yours

Great poem 5/5
Best writeing about lust I have ever read,
And it flows almost perfect,
Keep up the good work,

Wonderful job! 5/5
I really liked this one!
Keep it up!

Take care

*High Five*

Definately one of my faves! ;o)