I really love your poetry.
It fully feels like it takes me into it.
Your details rock
5/5 again
-bam
p.s thank you hehe

VEry good poem, I really enjoyed it keep up the good work.

PS. Plz comment or rate on my poems.

I love the opening line! I was speechless in this poem! Amazing! 5/5!

TC :)

This poem is the oppisite of the poem i just read by you. The title caught my attention; "Unhappily Ever After" like i said in my previous comment, you made love seem like a fairy tale. This is ocmpletely opposite. Well the first stanza, makes the reader enjaged on what your saying. It makes the reader curious as to what ahppened long ago. This alliteration, "Broken and banished" also made me intrested in the poem. A brilliant use of alliteration. The secound stanza creates this sort of unreal imagery. And then this seems like a story and you wanna read more. It all has this magical feel to it. the last stanza, is osmething that i think we can all relate to soemtimes. Youve kinda made fairy tale up and yet said that t doesnt exist and it doesnt have that happy ending. Brilliant. Again to improve i sugegst you use punctuation. Otehr then that i really loved this. xx

I love this poem, it's amazing! 5/5!

The ending really speks to me.It's sounds as if there are now happily ever afters..I think thats true...At ;east in my world there arent.....
~Jo Anna EL

A witch for a princess...I think someone thought that of me before LOL an excellent write. Realism with a flare. outstanding.