Comments : Longing

  • 17 years ago

    by kida

    This poem i alrite i think it needs more flow but the wording and idea r both gr8 ur a very good writer. could u possibly comment on my poem 'don't make my mistakes' it is all a true story

  • 17 years ago

    by Summer

    This is cool, my friend told me something like this once.. I like it a lot.

  • 17 years ago

    by GeMiNi

    Thanks 4 the love ur really good to that poem was deep