Comments : Was It All Just Lies?

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so sad, yet such a beautiful read.
    The emotion behind the words are clear for all to see.
    The imagery and wording were wonderfully done and I thought it flowed well.

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aww, it seems like you've really been hurt by someone who you believed loved you. heartbreak is never easy

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    Very deep, very nice, love it,

  • 17 years ago

    by Brook

    This was good, i liked it. Maybe you could work on some rhyme scheme to make it flow better though? still good though, 4/5.
    <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow all your poems hit pretty close to home nice job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    This also reminds me of someone. i personally like poems that rhyme more but this was an ok poem. i will admit it wasnt one of my favorites cus it didnt really have a good flow to it. but keep on writing and it will get better!:]