by Jenni Marie
This was so sad, yet such a beautiful read. |
Aww, it seems like you've really been hurt by someone who you believed loved you. heartbreak is never easy |
by Dark Demise
Very deep, very nice, love it, |
by Brook
This was good, i liked it. Maybe you could work on some rhyme scheme to make it flow better though? still good though, 4/5. |
by Kaila
Wow all your poems hit pretty close to home nice job!! |
by Curry
This also reminds me of someone. i personally like poems that rhyme more but this was an ok poem. i will admit it wasnt one of my favorites cus it didnt really have a good flow to it. but keep on writing and it will get better!:] |