Comments : A Lie

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    A beautiful love,
    From two poetic hearts

    how sad......beautiful write Goran. I really enjoy reading your work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by shela

    Hmm so should I tell you how I feel about this, ok
    the poem is SS (sweet and sad).but it say alot, just forget it.
    I will email you,

    but a great poem though.5/5

  • Hi
    iam so glad to see another poem by the favorit poet of all...it amazes me how u come up with such a words and rhyming...if i had those words of yours then i would easily tell u what does ur poems mean..but as for ur poem
    its really sad..indeed very sad..but i don't much agree with u, because my friend don't u think ur being a little unfair....a little lie and everything is over..was there any start....i shall write u if i get the time and courage..and if not...then in time i shall tell u..
    great job
    god bless

  • 17 years ago

    by jello

    Ah it's so beautiful...as always. keep writing, you're amazing!

  • 17 years ago

    by mrhope

    My great friend Goran, the reality is this life is based on lies, who is true? no one,
    we spend our times with persons we know 85% of what they are saying is lie, yet we do listen to them as the life is based on lie, I love this poem because again you have wrote my feelings,
    You are saying it is over because of a lie but look at me how i spend many years around someone who i knew lied to me everytime but yet my supid heart couldnot leave her until finaly she left me for another guy.
    hey dude, remember you advised me to be a strong man, but I am see you upset in your poems these days, I hope you doing fine.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    ::feels pain in heart:: jeesh, way to make a girl cry! lol, very touching poem, i expected nothing else from you... hey i finished those lyrics, i think they came out good if you wanna look. i'm bored lol... nice job though 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Good poem goran, 5/5!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow Goran, wonderful Write. I loved it. The flow was excellent. Keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Wow i like this poem it is nice keep up the good work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. beautiful goran.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent job on the poem. Glad i read this one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    What else can I say but that this was a beautiful poem! I just absolutely love it. It honestly made me get a knot in my throat. I went through something so similar. But it wasn't just a lie...more like a rumor...=/. Anyways, Goran, this was an excellent write! I loved it!! I'm glad I read this! Take care.

    -`Poetess

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Another absolutely beautiful poem from you, Goran . It was written differently, but still wonderfully written . Yu really know how to hit the heart, mangg` .(=
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Xcellent poem, i like the feelings and heartfelt thoughts that i see in it. Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    Have you ever read something and, even though you just kind of skim through, not really focusing on the words, you feel this kick right in your chest? I think that your poem might have subconciously made me weak. Nice.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Another wonderful poem. Great job another 5/5 :)

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    OMG this poem teased me lols greatly written and yeah all of you have say was true and very well penned I think thgis poem was for me lol hahaha sorry if i left the poetry but then there are momories of friends here at my heart ou know that dude great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned. This part was especially touching:

    I was loved
    By an angel
    Who was spending
    Her
    Quality times
    To
    Write me a poem as well.
    A beautiful love,
    From two poetic hearts.
    But,
    It was ruined
    By a lie.

    Great job.